–verb (used without object)
1. to take great pleasure or delight (usually followed by “in” ).
2. to make merry; indulge in boisterous festivities.
–noun
3. boisterous merrymaking or festivity; revelry.
4. Often, revels. an occasion of merrymaking or noisy festivity with dancing, masking, etc.
After you are gone...
I revel in the scent of you
Over the battered pillows
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16 comments:
Very nice take on the photo.
I really like this - so simple and so good.
Lovely! :)
perfect-love it!
Excellent. For more on "battered pillows," please see my blog. :-)
Nothing better than a little revelry to start the inspiration flowing ... nicely written!
Isn't it odd how we all relate to the scents of our loved ones? Well done.
I revel in your brilliant creativeness! Love it! :-)
very nice...the scent of battered pillows ...nice image...bkm
Love it! Ahh to revel in the sent left behind on such battered pillows.
Super, super!
tenderly put!
Gorgeous haiku!!!
Simply said but you said it all!
Christine
I like the way you weave the whole piece together..plus a terrific poem!
Love this haiku -- even without the prompt it tells its own story so simply -- like a sigh made up of words.
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