–noun
a deep, narrow cleft between hills; shady dell.
There,
Lost
In the
Dark dingle,
The metallic dell
Of seemingly faltering love,
I have lost the key to your dreams.
Unable to mourn,
I rattle
The lock
In
Vain.
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15 comments:
lost the key yet still you rattle...stirs a bit of emotion...nice magpie!
Losing the key to dreams,,, Excellent writing,.
Lovely write, unable to mourn...that is a captured soul ...very well done...bkm
wow, loved this one.
losing the keys to your dreams is sad, but transformation is in the air, you are pursuing a different kind of dream with your rattling and wondering...
neat magpie!
well done-losing the key to your dreams...love it!
Beautiful!
Simply elegant ... I wasn't sure what dingle meant, glad I now know.
Nathalie, that is spectacular!
Metallic dell is wonderful!
Your wording is magnificent. A delicious read! :)
A poignant piece. Lovely in its simplicity and the imagery it evokes.
You have a beautiful, classical style. Your words are charming, and so poignant.
This certainly opens doors to a lot of thoughts. I shall ponder awhile.
Wonderful! I love the dark dingle - it exudes mystery and secrets kept.
Sad and forlorn. Words forgotten and found.
Lovely!
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