Tuesday, 23 February 2010

Combust

COMBUST

v. intr.
1.
a.To catch fire; burst into flame.
b.To undergo combustion; burn.
2.To become suddenly angry or agitated: .
v. tr.
1.To cause to burn; ignite.
2.To cause to become angry or violent



That night,
Life times away,
You whispered in my ear,
Urgent wild accented stories
In words I could not decipher.
But look, old world magic:
My heart combusted still
As we held hands,
Eyes fast.


The background picture is copyright of Willow of Willow Manor, who has put it forth as a writing prompt.
Join the writing fun at Magpie Tales.

18 comments:

  1. Symmetrically divine. Wondering if "life times" should be "lifetimes"?
    Strange how eastern European hotels seem to conjure up romance!!

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  2. The flame of lust lives forever, the match but for a moment.
    I enjoyed this poem.
    rel

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  3. Excellent use of the prompt. Yah, you gotta watch out for these Eastern European lotharios - they might be spies!

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  4. Loved this, very clever and heart rending.. I really felt the words
    told so much in a succinct way.
    Chris

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  5. Great piece, ah, the romance of old world magic, yes, perfect. Thanks!

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  6. Spacedlaw,
    Very good. I love your take on igniting. Nice to meet you! :)
    The Bach

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  7. nicely done. like the way you laid this out as well...

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  8. I love that old world magic!

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  9. Wonderful response to the prompt!

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  10. Ah yes, the French - so romantic. Great work Nathalie!

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  11. i really like this

    smiles,

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  12. Love the line "my heart combusted still."

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  13. I love the combustion/passion metaphor. And I love how you've been treating the prompt - with your poem right on the picture. It's like a really cool poetry postcard!

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  14. http://adivashammer.com/archives/1124/comment-page-1#comment-8521


    happy to be reading your work...sometimes the obvious unions are the most powerful!

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  15. AHH - l'amore รจ dolce - l'amour est doux -- love is sweet!
    Joanny
    http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/2010/02/matches.html

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  16. Amost makes me want to take my next vacation in Bratislava! Any joiners? You really started something Willow, now how many little firestarters are sparking about? Matchmaker matchmaker make me a match..in Bratislava!

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