–noun
a crayon-like oil-based cosmetic used in colouring the lips, usually in a tubular container.

She made her own
Blending shades of universe
Spices and scents from afar
A kiss from her
Would bind you to her whims
Or freeze your heart in its path
Never mind her eyes
Her lipstick was deadly
Sweet Medusa
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Sweet Medusa-- oh Sweet Medusa what a deadly game we play -- a good take on the Magpie -
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Very femme fatale! Medusa! Don't look at her! Excellent poem and I love how you got your poem into the lipstick picture. What a perfect blend. MMMMMedusa! How'd ya do that? Talent!
ReplyDeleteAhhh, good work, Nathalie!
ReplyDeleteLove that stinger "Sweet Medusa" ending!
ReplyDeleteIt appears painted lips have magical powers...if you think about it, it is true.
ReplyDeleteOh sweet Medusa, indeed! What a lovely piece -
ReplyDeleteYes, never take your eye off the ball! Women are good magicians.
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Excellent. You just know a kiss from Medusa would have to be deadly. And if you somehow survived her kiss and her glance, her "hairdo" would be sure to get you!
ReplyDeleteYou have blended exotic "shades of universe" -- well done.
ReplyDelete'freeze your heart in its path'... so powerful. Love the Medusa take on the prompt, clever!
ReplyDeletewicked cool magpie! she's a heart stealer...one kiss at a time...
ReplyDeleteNow that's some powerful lipstick.
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Don't kiss, you won't live to tell!
ReplyDeleteCan you buy it in Boots? What a femme fatale!
ReplyDeletecreative and fun!
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I will be thrilled to have you visit me!
Beautiful -- I think we were on similar wave lengths with this prompt.
ReplyDelete"Blending shades of universe' is a killer line. I absolutely love it and the tone of your poem. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written.
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Well done Natalia... There is so much power in a kiss, especially one from Medusa! Loved this!
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